8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-07-31 11:14:58no paragraphs and you started in the middle of the story this shoould have been chapter two out of three delete and rewrite and use a good editor from now onanonymous readerReport 2011-04-20 20:54:58EVER HEARD OF PARAGRAPHS ? Redtube xxx Will the daughter and son stay with mom or will they eventually leave her???? THIS NEEDS A MAJOR REWRITE USING A GOOD EDITORREADERReport 2007-06-06 16:17:09start from the beginning, this would be a great part 2 or 3.READERReport 2007-05-17 07:09:23Great story. Will the daughter and son stay with mom or will they eventually leave her???? Hard to imagine the son and daughter having enough energy after all the sex activity, to play sports of any kind. Will the daughter and son stay with mom or will they eventually leave her????
