4 comments«1»READERReport 2006-01-16 17:57:16look people i know this is a rubbish story but im currently re writing it and the newer updated version will be out then so please if would like to reead it over and im sure you will enjoy the next one jus as much thanks for your comments.READERReport 2006-01-16 17:55:08It’s not that bad just needs a lot of work! Porn Never write another story again.«1» 1/0 Shit. 1/0 Shit. If you like I’d gladly give you a hand!READERReport 2006-01-14 00:36:21Wall of textREADERReport 2006-01-13 13:13:39Spelling and grammer? If you like I’d gladly give you a hand!READERReport 2006-01-14 00:36:21Wall of textREADERReport 2006-01-13 13:13:39Spelling and grammer? If you like I’d gladly give you a hand!READERReport 2006-01-14 00:36:21Wall of textREADERReport 2006-01-13 13:13:39Spelling and grammer? Never write another story again.«1» 1/0 Shit. 4 comments«1»READERReport 2006-01-16 17:57:16look people i know this is a rubbish story but im currently re writing it and the
