6 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-03 20:58:18Way, way too many misspelled words. Are the characters Amish? XXX What does “ye” mean? Learn to proofread and edit your stuff BEFORE posting.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 09:52:23good story cant wait for the next chapter.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-27 18:31:51go away pervert below!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-27 08:10:03Nice story. Learn to proofread and edit your stuff BEFORE posting.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 09:52:23good story cant wait for the next chapter.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-27 18:31:51go away pervert below!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-27 08:10:03Nice story. Learn to proofread and edit your stuff BEFORE posting.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 09:52:23good story cant wait for the next chapter.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-27 18:31:51go away pervert below!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-27 08:10:03Nice story. Several omitted words that need to be included to make the sentence complete. I really read stories mostly for the story line. Learn to proofread and edit your stuff BEFORE posting.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 09:52:23good story cant wait for the next chapter.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-27 18:31:51go away pervert below!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-27
