WHAT KIND OF RELATIONSHIP DID THEY HAVE BEFORE THIS? WHAT KIND OF SEXUAL EXPERIENCE DO THEY HAVE. Porn DID THEY EVER FEEL ANYTHING FOR EACH OTHER BEFORE THIS? DO THE PARENTS FIND OUT? where is the background and character development? where is the background and character development? WHERE ARE THEY? HOW OLD ARE THEY? WHERE ARE THEY? Me personally I give it 3 out of 5 and I look foward to see this progress.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-19 06:01:46A great story but needs to be longer. DID THEY EVER FEEL ANYTHING FOR EACH OTHER BEFORE THIS? 12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2013-12-18 20:18:34THE BEST THING YOU CAN DO IS DELETE IT AND START OVER FROM THE BEGINNING. delete and rewrite using a good editor before reposting THEN IT MIGHT BE WORTH READING.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-01 18:21:12Not really much to say that hasn’t already been said.
