Constructive feed backs
More detail about the charcters. Don’t stop though.«12» Don’t stop though.«12» Constructive feed backs
More detail about the charcters. XXX Tube Need more it look more incomplete then complete.READERReport 2005-08-01 02:45:43Thats was WAY to short darling, your first effort was amazing. Constructive feed backs
More detail about the charcters. Need more it look more incomplete then complete.READERReport 2005-08-01 02:45:43Thats was WAY to short darling, your first effort was amazing. Don’t stop though.«12» Don’t stop though.«12» Constructive feed backs
More detail about the charcters. 8 comments«12»READERReport 2008-01-28 14:40:04Your writing a third one right?READERReport 2006-12-30 18:28:09i have 2 admit compared 2 the last one lhat was absolutly shitREADERReport 2005-12-26 01:09:46good i guess next time have pepper spray in ur purse or maybe a pocket knife lol and kick ur brothers ass tell your parents they wil do something (cops). . . …READERReport 2005-10-31 20:07:52Positive comment
Has a great start i guess. Don’t stop though.«12»
