Would love to be in Alan’s position. Putting in more background, descriptions, and working on punctuation and the like really make a big difference. Xxx video Would love to be in Alan’s position. This story is really hot, as are your others, but your writing in this one is far better. I notice you haven’t written a new story for a while. 4 comments«1»BadInAGoodWayReport 2011-08-27 01:43:45Mai I’ve come back to read this for a second time it was so good. I notice you haven’t written a new story for a while. This story is really hot, as are your others, but your writing in this one is far better. XXbillybigReport 2009-12-07 15:34:12she was good i’d blow him to eat her offAnonymous readerReport 2009-12-06 06:06:26all i can say is fuck that was hot…and i need to go wash my handsAnonymous readerReport 2009-12-06 02:11:47love ittt«1»
