Plus shows a maturity in the thought processes of writer. Redtube (Just be aware that others might think you are really weird in doing that!)Anonymous readerReport 2014-01-06 06:58:07great story looking forward to part 3Anonymous readerReport 2013-12-24 23:36:54Great story. Further on you can change it again as things happen to them. And centairly use the hint about there being two more girls /guys like him.Anonymous readerReport 2013-12-21 12:46:29Glad someone is reviving the seriesanonymous readerReport 2013-12-12 20:38:13convoluted,,, disjointed,,, in parts even hard to comprehend what you are writing about«123» Too bad. I suggest you write a description of the personalities of your characters and a small bio (it’s not necessary for the main character) and then stick to it. Like the style, well written with good English.
