5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-21 01:52:19It’s a good and more mature version of war on Geminar.anonymous readerReport 2013-10-17 01:57:57I’m sorry to say but this is not an original it’s an anime show called Tenchi muyo war on Genimar.anonymous readerReport 2013-10-17 00:21:02You have a good story going. You have left out important words and used some words incorrectly. XXX Tube If you will read your work aloud a few times to yourself before publishing the results will be much more satisfying for you and for your readers. You have left out important words and used some words incorrectly. Good luck. You need to do better editing. I advise to take your time and don’t get in a hurry. I know your next efforts will be even better. I advise to take your time and don’t get in a hurry.
