The story is a good on, though, so keep writing.«1» Whether you are or are not, you clearly need editorial help. ICTYBTIHTKYanonymous readerReport 2011-06-18 12:29:27good story want moreanonymous readerReport 2011-06-11 09:52:43I gave the story a positive rating, but you sure could use a good editor. Redtube xxx 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-05-12 02:02:45Are you a native speaker of English? ICTYBTIHTKYanonymous readerReport 2011-06-18 12:29:27good story want moreanonymous readerReport 2011-06-11 09:52:43I gave the story a positive rating, but you sure could use a good editor. ICTYBTIHTKYanonymous readerReport 2011-06-18 12:29:27good story want moreanonymous readerReport 2011-06-11 09:52:43I gave the story a positive rating, but you sure could use a good editor. Whether you are or are not, you clearly need editorial help. Whether you are or are not, you clearly need editorial help. There are many spelling errors and the dialogue is rather stilted in several places. There are many spelling errors and the dialogue
