“First person shooter” is inside their head, using “I did” “I saw” “I broke his neck.” A lot of people tend to forget which mode they are writing in.And yes I’m a nerd. It’s why I write scifantasy. XXX Tube 7 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-12-25 04:34:00I’m still not convinced about her being beautiful, maybe if you added the word beautiful sixteen to twenty more times and I might just be convinced that’s she’s at least slightly beautiful.anonymous readerReport 2012-07-22 21:18:04wonderful plz updateClyReport 2012-06-08 16:24:38One thing that popped in my head, if I start a story where the main character’s name is unknown in the beginning, I find it jarring when all of a sudden, in the middle of a fight scene, we know his name without anything to bring it on. “First person shooter” is inside their head, using “I did” “I saw” “I broke his neck.”
