The only ‘bad’ thing about your story that I hated to see, was that it had to end. Porn Nice storyAnonymous readerReport 2012-10-31 00:09:37Hello Stranger92 (This is the second part to my comment)
You did a great job of dividing your story into correct paragraphs, which makes it a lot easier to read. I love a good romantic story that has a happy ending and yours sure did. I agree with her 100%. You included enough detail to make the story interesting but not to much to make it boring. The characters seemed realistic and almost true to life. It is a fantastic story. HopefullAuthorHopefullAuthorReport 2012-10-30 23:58:13Hello Stranger92
I just finished reading your story, and I want to say that I loved it. I love a good romantic story that has a happy ending and yours sure did. I hope you will keep writing more
