So many errors like this spoilt this story for me. I did not finish reading it.«1» 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-06 00:54:20Don’t ever write again. Redtube xxx Learn to use names and describe the people involved. I did not finish reading it.«1» You suck.anonymous readerReport 2012-06-26 13:58:07Learn to spell, with American English before ever attempting to write anything ever again! Gave it a negative rating for all of the reasons stated above!anonymous readerReport 2012-06-25 01:20:24″aloud” is the opposite of “silent”, “allowed” means “permitted”. You suck.anonymous readerReport 2012-06-26 13:58:07Learn to spell, with American English before ever attempting to write anything ever again! Learn to use names and describe the people involved. I did not finish reading it.«1» Very poor quality!! 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-06 00:54:20Don’t ever write again.
