It was slightly better than the first though.Anonymous readerReport 2008-12-17 19:29:22MAKE A 3RD ONE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!«1234» if u worked on your editing a bit more then it would novel-ready! Xxx video if u worked on your editing a bit more then it would novel-ready! i dont know whether i should give it a positive or negative rating. if u worked on your editing a bit more then it would novel-ready! 20 comments«1234»anonymous readerReport 2011-03-13 16:15:40Oh my god please write moreAnonymous readerReport 2009-07-27 21:31:06When are you going to write a third part? Man this story is so good you have got to keep writing.READERReport 2009-07-03 01:30:02amazing talent!! Man this story is so good you have got to keep writing.READERReport 2009-07-03 01:30:02amazing talent!! 20 comments«1234»anonymous readerReport 2011-03-13 16:15:40Oh my god please write moreAnonymous readerReport 2009-07-27 21:31:06When are you going to write a third part? if u worked on your editing a bit more
