Desperate And Curvaceous Milf Gets The Hardcore Fucking She’s Been Craving

(i.e. Obviously, you did not proofread this or else you should have caught the duplication of words in your sentences. Porn I mean, you have them alone for a 3 day weekend and the sex is a quick BJ and a quick fuck that lasts only a couple of sentences total. Needs more detail. “walking up the the living room.” , “…gave my(sic) a boobjob”, “…what were were doing…”
This is pretty pitiful writing even if you are only 14.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 00:30:15Started out great and then you tried like hell to end it in half a paragraphanonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 00:29:54Started out great and then you tried like hell to end it in half a paragraphanonymous readerReport 2013-11-29 23:01:05Good, but way too short.