Look at The Camp nurse, It is a good story, but it really should be divided down into smaller ones, and it is quite repeptive, with some very weird stuff, i think you know what i mean. I think that if i made all these into one big story, or maybe two big stories, instead of posting them seperately by part, they would get much higher ratings. Redtube xxx LOL«12» This part is rated lower than Part II ?? you’re obviously getting bored and tired and the stories aren’t as good anymore. come back when you’re refreshed!READERReport 2004-09-13 22:20:27Bug eyed is what reading your stories has done to me.there is nothing wrong with the content, but the way you structure your stories needs alot of work.READERReport 2004-09-13 19:51:32Great Story..I love the way you introduce more characters even if is just for a short time..
