If you cannot proofread, find someone (who is literate) to do it for you. XXX PLEASE learn how to proofread you stuff BEFORE dumping onto this site. This is full of misspelled words and incorrect grammar. This one is so poorly written that I stopped after a few paragraphs. 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-15 01:31:23If this has been edited I am certainly happy that I did not try to read the previous version. This one is so poorly written that I stopped after a few paragraphs. If you are going to write, learn about what constitutes good writing. PLEASE learn how to proofread you stuff BEFORE dumping onto this site. If is NOT just a bunch of printed words. You even misspelled “collage(sic)” and “sus(sic)” among many others.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-14 20:38:39Much better than the one before.
