You apparently don’t know when to use ‘its’ (possessive) and when to use ‘it’s’ (contraction of ‘it is’. Redtube xxx 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-07 14:21:41Poor writing. So how a pet should be treated and how my MASTER is with me. ‘Its tits WHERE tightly…and THE tied…’, ‘…before the house went QUITE.’,
‘It felt hands on IT body…’, ‘Dinner is SERVICED…’, ‘…before BRING it to…’, etc, etc. You apparently don’t know when to use ‘its’ (possessive) and when to use ‘it’s’ (contraction of ‘it is’. Such poor writing makes your story unenjoyable reading.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-11 02:05:09I liked it very much. You apparently don’t know when to use ‘its’ (possessive) and when to use ‘it’s’ (contraction of ‘it is’. Please write another.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-09 15:41:10O————————————————————————————————————————K«1» So how a pet should be treated and how my MASTER is with me. You made several wrong choices in word selection (i.e.
