6/10«12» you are a great writer.READERReport 2005-04-01 19:51:20make ur stories longer and horneyer u write good stuuf but rite more long(dipshit)READERReport 2005-03-16 06:25:03yeah good and its not bad you coulda gottin more desciption, better spelling goddammit and onger story but if and if you make part two please make sure you do what people are saying like make it longer, more description etc. Redtube LOLREADERReport 2005-10-11 20:14:46too shortREADERReport 2005-07-12 02:26:36again my dear write a longer storie. you are a great writer.READERReport 2005-04-01 19:51:20make ur stories longer and horneyer u write good stuuf but rite more long(dipshit)READERReport 2005-03-16 06:25:03yeah good and its not bad you coulda gottin more desciption, better spelling goddammit and onger story but if and if you make part two please make sure you do what people are saying like make it longer, more description etc.
