If the story happens to you leave it there, If you’re an observer, stay with it. Porn If the story happens to you leave it there, If you’re an observer, stay with it. I have posted the next part and once they post it I think I fixed it. Keep practicing. the changing tenses, and viewpoint. Keep practicing. RREADERReport 2005-05-06 13:36:56that story was so hard 2 finish
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3/10«123» I have posted the next part and once they post it I think I fixed it. Keep practicing. RREADERReport 2005-05-06 13:36:56that story was so hard 2 finish
try again
3/10«123» 10/10READERReport 2005-05-16 02:49:4010/10READERReport 2005-05-06 20:01:38I am sorry about the tense changes and spelling. bb gg bg etc. 14 comments«123»READERReport 2006-04-21 20:30:39As a female i loved this story.
