I guess a neutral vote is in order because, like I said before, you have great ideas; you just need to tell them better.anonymous readerReport 2011-07-05 20:21:01First of all, this isn’t true. XXX Tube keep trying! I am not tearing you down or anything, but your style feels rushed and even a quick look-over before posting would benefit your writing. I would suggest having someone proofread before you postDanejarousReport 2011-07-05 20:42:08I don’t know why every time I see your name on a new story I read it. I am not going to tell you how you should write, but please check your work before posting. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-07-10 06:58:29poor writing and story telling skillsm but good ideas. I guess I just read your stories because you seem to have great ideas, but you just lack the skill at getting them down. However, the beginning was
