Really, I enjoy detail, but you don’t have to give us the exact description of an object EVERY time you mention it. XXX I think many people will be interested in it..!Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-11 02:09:35Wow… you rush the sex scene at the end and spend most of the story on bullshit that makes no sense, then give the lamest excuse for hooking up I’ve ever heard, followed by… you rush the sex scene at the end and spend most of the story on bullshit that makes no sense, then give the lamest excuse for hooking up I’ve ever heard, followed by… It’s okay to say “the mouthpiece” or “the jacket”. well not the lamest sex scene writing of all time, but it’s pretty damn bad. 11 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-25 09:28:39llaP7m A big thank you for your post.Really looking forward to read more.
