5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-24 19:20:07good story, a good build up is very important for engaging the reader…saying that, you’re posting on a sex site and you skipped all the sex!!!! Porn Nice job.Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-23 10:32:21Nope…another one like a bad porn flick…cum on her face…Gotta get that money shot even if it’s words in a story. …BORING!!! Would have been nicer if you would have described the full sex! 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-24 19:20:07good story, a good build up is very important for engaging the reader…saying that, you’re posting on a sex site and you skipped all the sex!!!! 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-24 19:20:07good story, a good build up is very important for engaging the reader…saying that, you’re posting on a sex site and you skipped all the sex!!!! if you hadn’t rushed an ending into one paragraph this story could have been great, but as is,
