ARE YOU SERIOUS???? The ones ending in “ly” should be limiter even more than the others. XXX Tube One last thought. You are prone to flowery verse that reminds me of Early O’Henry at his worst. Instead I she give you my honest thoughts. The racial stuff might be better handled without the tags like mulatto. Otherwise just use the period and say, “She was excited,” or show it with a description of your actions. Ponderous.wordytomReport 2008-10-01 18:56:11I am not going to be nice to you. You are prone to flowery verse that reminds me of Early O’Henry at his worst. Instead I she give you my honest thoughts. You have made the same mistake so many of us make when we begin to write. Dump those damned exclamation marks! ARE YOU SERIOUS???? You have made the same mistake so many of us make
