Great work, good story line, well balanced.«12345» 22 comments«12345»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-26 07:31:25g3Sqde Looking forward to reading more. XXX I would love to see how it turns out.READERReport 2007-03-25 21:49:47please dude i check to see if you write the new one like once a week. Very well written. Don’t take so long. Don’t take so long. Will read on…anonymous readerReport 2011-05-21 02:20:24Would love it if you would finish this story?! I would love to see how it turns out.READERReport 2007-03-25 21:49:47please dude i check to see if you write the new one like once a week. 10/10READERReport 2007-02-28 13:29:23Were is the next part ? Don’t take so long. Don’t take so long. Very well written. these are such good stories. Don’t take so long. Don’t take so long. Don’t take so long. Will read on…anonymous readerReport 2011-05-21 02:20:24Would love it if you would finish this story?!
