second the punctuation,spelling, etc were NOT half bad at all they were quite good.RicardusReport 2008-09-01 07:15:43The whole of this book so far is a really good bawdy romp, and certainly upholds the great traditions of that genre of literaturem but please, watch the spelling and puntuation, it can detract from the flow of things if you are having to stop and decipher various words and phrases.«1» 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-06-19 02:46:25love it! XXX but try lengthening the sex scenes they are really good but depending upon the scene, to short.Anonymous readerReport 2009-01-13 22:14:39Hahaha great 1NadezReport 2008-09-07 03:44:37First of Rich this person didn’t write the story. but try lengthening the sex scenes they are really good but depending upon the scene, to short.Anonymous readerReport 2009-01-13 22:14:39Hahaha great 1NadezReport 2008-09-07 03:44:37First of Rich this person didn’t write the story.
